Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
Deniseemily for Hound a.k.a. Jade
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language: Mature, little to no slang; no cussing but may use the odd blasphemous word or two; a slightly lower pitch; slight British accent is preferred but not mandatory (if you do try the accent, please also record your voice without it for comparison, unless it's natural)
History/relationships: Support of the Rifa Rangers, er- Game changers (rebranded)
Personality: The motherly figure of the group. The member with the most capability to be responsible, organised and careful, making sure the team doesn’t go overboard. She's got a good pair of ears on her and able to give advice when you need it. Is often seen getting along with KC
Feel free to vary the tone and wording, I'm interested to hear what you've got!
Cheery
[Laughs] "Sorry Reaper, looks like the name's staying. Rifa Rangers sounds too catchy to give up."
Doting over a dog
"You're just such a good boy, aren't you? Yes you are."
Scolding, stern
"This was the last straw. Imagine what could have happened if people were there? And the costs for damages is going to shoot through the roof!"
Worried, scared
"I can hear them...their voices won't leave me alone. I don't know how I'm going to sleep like this..."
Monologue; informative, stern but cheery in some places
"You must be our next client! My name's Hound, it's lovely to meet you! Reaper? Not here yet, she tends to be late...a lot." [chuckles nervously] "Please do take a seat though. Could you sign this while we wait? It's a non-disclosure agreement, I'm sure you know why we need this. Yes well, if you know what's good for you, then you certainly don't want us knocking at your doorstep." [pause] "Thank you for your cooperation! I'll go grab some cookies for you, I made them myself!"
A very good effort, well done! You paced yourself nicely through this, however in the first half you sounded just a tad unnatural, like as if you were reading through it instead of acting it out. Apologies if I'm not explaining myself well haha, but in the second half you sounded more natural and did very well! Thank you for taking the time to audition!
Thank you for taking time to respond to me and giving me feedback. I really have no experience so I really appreciate the feedback.