A Certain Magical Index Abridged
Renneko for Touma Kamijo
Okay, first off-shut the fuck up! Okay? I’m over here, just tryna be friendly and politely ask you to step away from the girl-who I’m sure is completely uncomfortable by your presence right now and-(BUNCH OF OTHER DUDES SHOW UP)*Dramatic humorous gasp*
Oh yeah, it’s a superelec-(MISAKA interrupts him) Oh okay, I guess we’re done here?
*Sigh* Alright. What do we got in the fridge-aminator? Oh, right. Power outage. Hm. Go figure. I am *so* giving that bitch a nickname. (Starts taking the sheets) Whatever, hopefully my bad luck’ll run out and then I can start finally saying that I’m not povertized. Then I can finally have more than just 2 friends! (Sees Index) And uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…
Overall, this was good. However, here are my issues. None of these are meant as an insult. I'm just taking you up on the feedback. 1. I'm like, 90% sure you're a female (Judging by your voice acting). Touma is a male, around 16 or 17. 2. Some lines seem too sarcastic, too drawn out, or too cartoony for my ideal Touma. 3. The voice overall is too high-pitched, and similar to SAO Abridged's Kirito. Thank you so much for your audition!
I really appreciate the feedback! It was kind of the direction I was taking it with the SAO abridged kirito. And yeah no I'm a proud 26 year old dude. That's my voice o natural lol. If you would like I can try to redo it with the feedback.
Hehe. You're a great voice actor dude! You can retry. But (obviously) that doesn't guarantee your part. XD
No problem, and I of course understand. If I can't fit your part for Touma I understand. I'll also be trying out for your minor roles for ep 1 as well. If you can think of any other character that you might like me to try out for let me know. I just haven't gotten around to it because of that 9-5.
Alright.