Eh, you really need to work on the voice. At times it comes across as being high-pitched and whiny, and you might need to listen to the voice example (again, if you have done so already, just listen to the voice more closely this time) to get the voice down. But you do have potential, though. Just keep working on it, and you'll eventually nail it. UNLESS that was an original take, but still, it's too high-pitched and whiny, and the voice cracks are not really pleasing to the ears either. Just giving you some constructive criticism. Like I said before, you do have potential, and I believe you can really nail the impression after a while of practice. Also, the sound quality was a little lower than your first audition, which I felt was better. Just keep practicing, and you'll eventually get it. ;) Just some constructive criticism, like I said before.