for sure best one i've heard

Definitely got the acting down for it, short of maybe the last line, with your voice shaking a bit it's hard to tell if you're hopeful or sad. That aside, you might want to position yourself (or your mic) just a bit further apart from each other to try and avoid the constant spiking. But still good job, keep at it. ^-^

I thought that the voice was good. Your inflections on some of these lines could've been better and it was a bit loud. In the first line you went from very upset to normal very quickly and it came out as sounding choppy. The second line was good but there was far too much spiking and made me throw off my headphones becasue of how loud it was. Your third line at the end sounded like you were more sad than happy or hopeful. I would say maybe fix the gain on your microphone, decrease your volume in audacity (or and other sound editing software), step back from your mic to avoid clipping as much, and upload multiple takes on your lines using different inflections. I don't mean this to seem rude in anyway; Im giving you constructive criticism in the nicest way possible ^-^. I honestly thought this voice was good but could be improved upon.