~RPG GAME~ Shuniu: Soul Sleep
chris12231 for Waters Ryusaki (new lines)
Laid back, mildly high pitched, nihilistic, lazy
That's some nice ornaments on your coat, be a shame if you left it somewhere
I could guide you through the trail, but your wallet looks alittle empty
Man, can't i not have to do this? uhg.
I like your audition, I'm joey's bud and more or less had Waters based off me so if you don't mind i'ma hit you up with a few tips on his personality. In your audition he comes off more as a brooding angry kid rather than a laidback thief, which is his role in the game. that should have been listed but oh well. He's friendly, but not too friendly, able to keep people from his usual intentions. Here's some character examples that might make more sense, you're coming off more as Shikamaru rather than something closer to Kakashi. keep it up bruh.
So I should try to sound more intimidating?
nah far from it actually, if you're trying to pinch a full pocket you don't want your mark to think you're gonna burn him and his family right?
I like the voice, but can you put more energy into it? Waters is a very upbeat but laid back thief, he's one of those thieves that steal from you and actually give you a chance to catch them buy playing chase, and also mocking you when you fail to catch him, a lot more energy and cockiness into it
Okay, sure!
I just made another audition so if you have time, could you please check it out?