A lot of your takes sound like you're trying to keep an 'inside voice'. it's been affecting your performance. you have a decent range, but it will help you a lot if you didn't sound like you were so afraid to raise your voice or inflection beyond a certain limit. I also recommend examining your dialogue chain for EQ. as it stands, it sounds a tad muddy.
yea sure, want me to re submit auditions?
please! I want you to have a definite fair shot and would rather not have technical things affect your chances.
Will do!