You have a great voice, but you're speaking far too fast and far too even. It sounds like a professional audiobook playing back at 2X speed. take a moment, slide into the head space. and don't be afraid to be sillier than you think is necessary.
Thanks for the feedback! I took "hasty and distracted" to mean he was talking fast to try to get through the situation he's in - I'll keep this in mind next time!
For the direction, Think less like he's rushing through the conversation and more like he's packing for a trip or working on an experiment while he's talking to Serling. "yes yes, I know you're here to talk to me but I'm far too busy, let's get this over with."
Ahh, okay. I think I understand! Would you be opposed to me submitting a second audition?