Hello Ligh1d0rk, Thank you so much for your audition and being interested in our project! We'd like to give you some feedback based on what you've sent us. You seem to have a very soft spoken voice. With these lines Haru is Cheerful, Agressive, and Sentimental. You could use some more expression when speaking your lines, the emotion is falling a bit flat. For example the last line was more of a warm sentimental tone for Haru, rather you sounded more tearful and sad. The second line where Haru is yelling and curses you seemed a bit hesitant to swear. Haru curses a lot so you will need to be confident when doing so. He often shifts from soft and cheeful to a more loud aggressive tone. Out of the three takes you did, you progressively did better, the third being the best out of the three takes. However it still needs tuning, you need to sound like you're genuinly yelling at someone rather than just slightly raising your tone. We would really appreciate if you took this feedback under consideration and send us another sample of the lines when you are ready!