hey, i loved your audition. you were pretty much right on the money. here's some criticism. i liked that you took the instruction to space out your words for the first line, but also make the assumption that we still have to make sure that the visuals and sound need to stay interesting. try to speed up some next time. if your director needs you to slow down, they will ask you to. for the second line, again, same thing. make sure you don't draw things out too much. for the final line, everything was fine until REALLY LOUD YELLING. never ever ever yell fully into your mic. you will hurt someone on the listening end and you will destroy your microphone. two huge no no's. try to combine whispering with speaking loudly. and when you need to speak especially loud, turn your head to the side. never belt out your line at at your mic at full force. and also, the word was "fiend" pronounced "fēnd" (fee-nd)" if you like, i have gone through formal training. you can hit me up and when you have the time we can go over some of the basics. i see that you're new to this whole voice acting thing so i want to help you out.

Hey, thanks for the feedback: I'll definitely take those points to heart. Sure, I would appreciate your help: I'm always looking to improve my voice acting. Glad you liked the audition. My email is [email protected] and my Skype is mvajd91. Mike V.