{Castaways} LiEat II, III Dub - Round 2
LexHankins for Sofia Juanele
Part: LiEat II
Age: 25
Voice Type: Medium-Low - Medium / Calm, expressionless, monotonous, stoic, worrywort, caring
The head of the resort in Azure Town and “mother” of William. She was formerly an executioner and is regretful of that past. She carries a whip with her in order to punish any wrongdoers at the resort. She acts tough and strong, but in reality, she worries and cares deeply for her employees. She hides the fact that William is a dragon because she fears people will attempt to hunt him for their own gain.
So you’re the little sister of the new guard. Beg for your life… Ah, no. I meant to say, I’ve been most impolite. Apologies, I used to be an executioner. I still have some… habits. Are you hurt?
...Lucas being stabbed, or strangled, or burned… It’s all too common for the man… They’re always minor injuries, so I couldn’t be too worried.
(To William/fighting back tears) ...I’m sorry. I pushed this all on you. We can’t erase bad dreams. If we don’t carry them, we can’t grow stronger. You don’t need to push yourself anymore.
Sorry for the late response! Been super busy. I'll be extending the deadline further so you can reaudition with the critique i mind if you want. The voice you gave Sofia is a bit too deep/sultry for this character. The part where she interrupts herself in the first line sounds a bit too mechanical. She's trying to snap herself from a bad habit. She's not too expressive here but there should be some sort of change in the dynamics in this phrase. Overall the steady tone is what I'm looking for but it sounds a bit too mechanical. make it a slight less monotone and it will improve your performance!