[PAID WORK] I Saw Ruth Tickling Santa Claus?
notashrimp16 for Penny Lane
Penny's a playful, mischievous trickster!
22 years of age, she's very sneaky, sly, and loves to prank her friends and cousin.
It's all in good fun though, she only likes to tease those who she cares about.
She takes pride in her ability to avoid getting tricked or outsmarted, so she'll get a bit bitter if she herself ends up getting tricked.
Unfortunately for her, Ruth tends to counter every prank or trick she tries to pull.
Ruth, less expositing, more letting me go. (Annoyed, yet playful tone.)
Why would I stop? Looks like you're having a fun time! (Said in a teasing, sarcastic tone)
NO RUTH! NOT THERE, PLEASE! I'M SORRY! (Say it while laughing! Laughing out of your mind! Laugh your head off!)
The second take of the first line was just great. You made Penny sound done, but still fun. However the second line could use a bit more attitude. The second take was good, but it was read a bit too quick. The laugh those was great! Really cute! Thank you!