[PAID WORK] I Saw Ruth Tickling Santa Claus?
Shark for Ruth McAnacol
Ruth is an inventor, and self-proclaimed genius. Like her forehead, Ruth's ego is very large.
19 years old, she loves to invent tools for tickling, and contraptions to restrain victims!
Honing her craft from a young age, Ruth is a very talented engineer.
She is sassy, rude, and antisocial. Treats everyone around her as inferior, only being polite and nice to her cousin, Penny.
Regardless, Ruth often uses her cousin as a test subject for her inventions.
All brains, and looks, too. (Very confident, and sassy)
Yes, I am a genius. Why couldn't you tell? (Say it quick. Sound smug, and condescending)
Aha! I have you now, Santa!
I think you can definitely use some improvement. You read the lines well, but it lacked the energy and spunk needed to suit the character. Try to be more outgoing, and don't be afraid to get loud... but not too loud. To help, look at the character or the content that you're reading for to get an idea for the tone of the comic. Thank you for the audition though!