[PAID WORK] I Saw Ruth Tickling Santa Claus?
chicha3maddy for Penny Lane
Penny's a playful, mischievous trickster!
22 years of age, she's very sneaky, sly, and loves to prank her friends and cousin.
It's all in good fun though, she only likes to tease those who she cares about.
She takes pride in her ability to avoid getting tricked or outsmarted, so she'll get a bit bitter if she herself ends up getting tricked.
Unfortunately for her, Ruth tends to counter every prank or trick she tries to pull.
Ruth, less expositing, more letting me go. (Annoyed, yet playful tone.)
Why would I stop? Looks like you're having a fun time! (Said in a teasing, sarcastic tone)
NO RUTH! NOT THERE, PLEASE! I'M SORRY! (Say it while laughing! Laughing out of your mind! Laugh your head off!)
These were good takes. The voice and attitude were pretty on point! The delivery of the first line was great, but the second line could use a bit more energy to it. More playful. The laughter though is great! Just be more aware on the audio levels so it doesn't get in the red. All in all, good takes!