[PAID WORK] I Saw Ruth Tickling Santa Claus?
Dakota13 for Penny Lane
Penny's a playful, mischievous trickster!
22 years of age, she's very sneaky, sly, and loves to prank her friends and cousin.
It's all in good fun though, she only likes to tease those who she cares about.
She takes pride in her ability to avoid getting tricked or outsmarted, so she'll get a bit bitter if she herself ends up getting tricked.
Unfortunately for her, Ruth tends to counter every prank or trick she tries to pull.
Ruth, less expositing, more letting me go. (Annoyed, yet playful tone.)
Why would I stop? Looks like you're having a fun time! (Said in a teasing, sarcastic tone)
NO RUTH! NOT THERE, PLEASE! I'M SORRY! (Say it while laughing! Laughing out of your mind! Laugh your head off!)
Well as you said, could certainly use more developing. But your voice sounds very fitting for the role! You just need more energy and attitude! Penny is a playful character, and you do get that across in the second line. Just add more attitude! Add some spunk and sass. Also, the laughing was adorable, but Penny is laughing her head off. Like it really really tickles. Like... the way you laugh when you're watching the most funniest scene in a movie. The point where you're sides are hurting from laughing and you can't breathe. Feel free to submit another audition if you'd like! (Also, 'expositing', not 'exposing'. The second page of the comic that contains the line is in the updates. There's a link provided. take a look if you need context) Thanks you!
Hi! Thank you for letting me audition again, as well as providing great criticisms! I hope you think this one fits Penny more. Thank you again. :)