Your voice is absolutely perfect! I would totally recommend you sit down for a couple hours if you can and just read this entire story straight, it is one of my favorite stories and it will give you a better insight to how Anon acts and what he's like. Also if you are interested in this we also have another voice over project that also needs an Anon character if you would like to try it out. Your inflection was perfect, vocal patterns were amazing, and your audio is perfectly leveled. Wonderful audition :)