WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
crosslachantu for The Arbalest
"Shoot, bandage, and pillage: the dancing steps of war."
Runaway, soldier, and survivor are all marks that have come to define the Arbalest. Carrying and using her father's crossbow since the age of eight, she's refitted and honed her senses to even the most errant target and is trained in all types of ammunition from iron bolts to flares.
The Arbalest is on a mission to prove herself a successor to her deceased father, to an almost faulting degree. This results in a serious attitude that may be masking her own fears of failing to live up to his memory.
Voice: Medium; Serious - Glory-Hound - Stressed
Landing a Critical Hit - Victorious Excitement
Hell's fire I'm good!Bull's eye!Becoming Fearful - Weeping Terror
I can feel Death's sights on my heart!N-no! No more!Becoming Powerful - Striking Tenacity
Hah! My bolts know their eyes!I have sighted their weaknesses!
Pitch is good here, matching the character's age while complimenting her enthusiasm and excited tone. Delivery is almost perfect again, you kept a balanced pace throughout the audition and emoted well in the first and final lines. Tone is well realized in how enthusiastic and energetic you've made it, though I am glad that you kept a somewhat serious demeanor throughout. Once again, only complaint is that you could have emoted harder and more panicked in the second lines; though it's still an overall great audition.