Sword Art Online Abridged Episode 2: Kibaou Needed
shuyeezy for Kibaou
Character Description/Motivation: In short, he’s played in the manner of a whiny man-child who is initially very forthright as if he views himself as the premier example of an alpha-male. Then the episode progresses and the more he spends time with Diavel, the more submissive and tsundere he gets. This ties into a joke about how Kibaou loses his Seme, which means Top- or more dominant partner in Diavel when he dies to the boss later in the episode.
Voice Description: I was envisioning a naturally Medium to Medium-High Tone that acted really accusatory and tough in his first appearance, but opened his colors the more the interacted with the cast. But Experiment. I love being pleasantly surprised with others takes on characters.
[After a line in which Agil just calls Kibaou a “Dense Motherfucka”.]
“[Hurt, but still angry] Hey! [Slight Pause] That’s MISTER Dense Mothafucka to you! [More Calm tone] ...I also answer to Kibaou. [And BACK TO YELLING] And I HATE BETA TESTERS!”
[After Diavel announces there will be MALE BONDING TIME.]
“[Excited initially, but then TSUNDERE] WOOOOO- I mean, HELL NO!”
[Diavel is dead and Kirito says he still treats SAO very much like any other game.]
“[Hesitant at first; Ends Aggressively] You.. You’re a fucking monster! It’s like you don’t care for anyone else’s lives!”
I'm sure your voice would be suitable if for a few things. 1: The recording quality sounds a bit fuzzy. 2: There is background noise that is distracting. 3: This whispered tone isn't going to cut it for the loudmouth I had in mind. 4: You don't sound that committed to the audition. Now if all of those were improved, I'm sure your career in voice acting would flourish.
Appreciate the feedback! :D