Class B Week 10 Homework Submission
Ethanr1222 for Sword of Destiny
In the following narration, find all the hidden emotions in the copy and bring them out as naturally as you can. Take your time to create choices and involve yourself in the copy. Feel the words.
Peer Review: Please provide at least 1 feedback to someone who has not received a feedback on the homework link. Seeing others' feedback and providing feedback yourself is a great way to learn as well.
The Sword of Destiny is a mysterious artifact of unimaginable power and magic. It resides in the X-Zone, where it’s magic bestows riches on all who enter.
n the X-Zone, small treasures are multiplied into vast fortunes. Entry into the X-Zone is coveted by all, but granted only to a fortunate and adventurous few.
In the world of games, four diverse characters vie for control of The Sword Of Destiny and the X-Zone – the virtuous Princess Kristana, the fiercely independent sword maiden Kyia, the evil and seductive sorceress Silverista, and the Dragon Lord Brutalis.
I give you an upvote! I wish my take was as good as yours because your version was what I was trying to aim for! There was a terrific balance between your clarity, projection and your emotions!
Thank you so much!
Keep practicing! I'm sure you can do one just as good!
Your welcome and thank you.