Your voice's pretty good. but you have to remember that she's a goddess. try to sound more official and with more dignity. talk slower too. and add more emotion to your crying, imagine as if a close friend of yours had died. (I hope it WON'T happen though) I would like you to submit another audition. except for what I just said, your voice is really good :D
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Hylia has a very gentle personality. she has a deep love for her land and its people and wants to protect it at all cost.
I am the white goddess, Hylia, This is a loftwing. a bird of the gods.
The master sword, a blade that repels evil, will sunder the earth...and act as a pillar to support the earth as it floats up to the sky. and yet, it was created by the gods, meant for our use alone. in order to exert its power on the surface world, it must be reforged by human hands. the hands of the most honorable hero in the land.
The sword was tempered by your spirit. you woke it...and will serve as its master for all eternity... This is because you deeply love the land of Hylia...and all its people...as I do... (crying) But because of this, your life has been full of suffering. I have watched you...and felt your pain like a knife through my body.
