Undertale: The Musical
InsomniaVA for Undyne
Undyne, captain of the royal guard, would probably be a leading lady if she wasn't so fierce, gruff, and overall determined. The baddest of dudes in the Underground, Undyne treats everything, be it cooking or ripping out a human's soul, with UNRIVALED PASSION. Mezzo-alto, ability to belt recommended.
Fair warning - Undyne has, with Spear of Justice and the Undyne date, probably the hardest songs in the musical.
But first, human, let me tell you the tragic tale of our people. It all started, long ago… No, you know what? SCREW IT! Why should I tell that story WHEN YOU'RE ABOUT TO DIE?
Ah,sorry. I was talking so long… you're out of tea, aren't you? I'll get some more… Wait a second… Papyrus… his cooking lesson… HE WAS SUPPOSED TO HAVE THAT RIGHT NOW!
(Sing any song - see description for specifications)
I don't think you put enough passion into the end of the first line. Undyne's about to try and kill a child via show-stopping number and/or spears, and it sounded like you were done trying to get the Starbucks barista to pronounce your name right. Like with Muffet, the echo and reverb behind the voice is a little distracting. Those who get cast would be singing and recording live for me to do the audio editing myself, and wouldn't have special effects behind them. Thanks for auditioning!
Thanks for the criticism (well, constructive). I actually kind of laughed at what you thought it was. It was a bit more passionate before, but I'm still working on trying to get my belting to be less blared through the audio so I had to be quieter. Same thing for the effects on Muffet.
I try to make my criticism not sound like things I absolutely hate :)
I don't entirely hate when they do that, it's actually kind of funny.