I liked the energetic, kind of happy memory vibe that your tone gave the read. There were a couple of spots early on where you might have taken things a little fast but you were clear and comprehensible the whole way through. Good work!

Your delivery here was awesome!!! I love how you chose a more upbeat tone than I read the script to be; it made it very pleasant to listen to. Your speed in these auditions also has become better with time; still quick, but not as fast as before. Great work!

Ha nice, but watch speed :) Lovely excitement and emotive storytelling. Think of the person you are talking to, "see" them, and talk to them all the while making sure they understand and hear you. Well done!