Normally I'd say, gj and ty for auditioning but since you asked for feedback there are a few things that can be worked on, firstly, while I'm happy you added music to your audition there isn't much else going on, i'll be the first to say that when you read this specific little poem you must engage in a more, sinister and menacing voice, when you read this poem it seemed like you were just 'reading' it and not putting forth much effort into it. Secondly, slow down and follow the tempo of the song as the poem was specifically written to follow the beat of the Lavender Town Theme Song, ((example here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FT_ZpHgiIKo&t=39s)) Lastly, I suggest for more practice and perhaps watching others perform the piece to get a better impression of how to possibly do Hypno's Lullaby. If you scroll up you'll see that I linked a previous CP CC I did and in that very same one, I included HL. Anywho, I hope we can work together in the future again, I'm sure you'll improve with time.