Darling in the Franxxx - Abridged Parody
Drew Georgios for Zorome
In the original, Zorome is cocky and passionate. He tends to cause trouble and often boasts of his abilities, whatever the actual skill level may be. He’s childish in nature and a bit bratty in his mentality. He looks up to his authorities and greatly aspires to grow up and become an adult. He believes most of what he’s told as well.
In the abridged, Zorome is the troublemaker. He bullies Hiro for his inability to pilot a mecha successfully, and for everything else that Hiro is. He’s incredibly gullible, to the point that he believes almost everything he hears. He’s very immature and very selfish. He’s very persistent and once he believes something, it’s difficult to change his mind.
Vocal Qualities:
A teenage male voice.
Mid-high to high pitch.
We are open to interpretation.
Line 1: “Hey did you guys hear about that pink haired girl? I overheard a guard say that if you ride with her three times, watch Shark Tale every night for the next 7 days, and eat an entire tub of chocolate ice cream, you die.”
Context: This is the opening comment that Zorome makes when we first meet the members of Squad 13.
Line 2: “Are you seriously worried about that dipshit?”
Context: Zorome is questioning why Ichigo is worried about Hiro.
Line 3: “We’re going to the Ee-Ast Station!”
Context: In response to Kokoro asking where the squad was headed, Zorome badly mispronounces East.
The most immediate piece of feedback I notice is that you're talking really quickly. Other than that I liked the delivery, especially on that last line.