Much better, and a lot in tune for what I am looking for. Torn between you and jdraeger5's audition.
Appreciate the feedback!
Voice Actor
Paladin Maxwell is a Brotherhood Paladin serving under Senior Scribe Serina in her long range patrol. Upon returning to base, they spotted a squabbling group of NCR and Legion and decided to ensnare them in a trap of their own. However, Maxwell has his doubts that the Scribe truly came to the Vault for the enemy...
Maxwell is a rather mixed bag. While he understands right from wrong, he also has no problem with leaving no survivors in any engagement. Evident by his firing upon innocent Wastelanders during the crossfire. To him, victory and survival is what matters. As long as he and his friends survive and fight another day, what's a few nobodies? Maxwell is hardened, intelligent, and skeptical.
We ambushed two squabbling groups of Legion and NCR while on our way back to base. We took them by complete surprise and almost annihilated them.
If you truly want to put yourself in harms way, then go on ahead. But don't say I didn't warn you.
Speak to the Scribe if you want to help. She is in the room to my right. Otherwise keep out of our way.
