Fate/Apocrypha: The Great [Abridged] War
designer101 for Atalanta
A famous huntress that appears in Greek mythology. She became famous after being the first one to drive in an arrow during the extermination of the Calydonian Boar.
Also, she is included as a member of the Argonautai, which assembled brave heroes from all over Greece.
For the voice we'd like a tsundere/angry female close to mid-tone. The rest we're open to interpretation.
My wish to the Holy Grail is only one: That is, for children everywhere to be blessed.
Call me cute and I'll shove an arrow where the damn sun don't shine! GOT THAT?!
A Tsundere? Really shirou? Tch-- Dumbass.
This is an offering to the two Gods. Phoebus Catastrophe!
(Battle grunting, yelling and attacking)
Audio is, while not "noisy" its... messy. Character choices aren't fully present, and the execution on whats there is unfortunately rushed. Don't be afraid to take your time. Making things sound natural is an important part of being a VA
What do you mean by messy? Also can you elaborate on how I seem to be rushing? I really appreciate the advice, I'm just a little confused is all.
By messy I mean to say its not fully capturing your voice. Frequently in the recording you sound far away or obstructed, and overall quiet. You are rushing because you are rushing, take your time with the line. You don't need to speed read it, say it naturally. and no worries, this isnt easy stuff
I guess I do have a bad habit of talking quickly, I have been trying to work on it but I guess its needs more work, ill keep your advice in mind. As for the audio, I just got a new set up recently so that might relate as to why, I'm still experimenting with the settings so ill try to move closer to the mic and change the gain. Thanks for the advice.