Good job on the projection and clarity. A bit of your sentences kind of blend together rhythmatically so be careful of that. A couple of your "B's" were masked (meaning you couldn't make them out, so be careful of that). Loved your encouraging "Uggh" that was funny - so thanks for the laugh. I like that you worked at being natural and clear at the same time. So just watch your not running words together too rhythmically. Good work otherwise. You have a fun SPOOF Read (so making fun of a commercial) so that's fun to play with in the future, but won't be ideal all the time. Just something to keep in mind

You did really great!! I love the pace of it, and you sound very nice, loud and clear. You kinda added/changed tiiiiny bits of the script in a couple places (like saying GGC instead of GGG,) but that might just be nitpicking.