great job! all i can say is to slow down in some places, but great job nonetheless!

Yes, speed is your enemy on this one. You have some nice cadences in your voice and I love the gentleness in your natural voice. It's really approachable and light. Good job projecting, and I think it would have been MUCH better had you slowed down. Because you went so fast, it makes it hard to critique your articulation. You pulled them off without plosive sounds and everything but it was so run by that it wasn't articulated much. So slow down next time so we can hear your work.