oh shit sorry i uploaded the full file- i had recordings i was doing for other projects in there as welll skjdajkfdkjsfkjdskj if u want me to reupload it as a solo i will gladly- it starts about halfway thru the recording

Inflection. Inflection. Inflection. I know hearing "do better" is difficult. However reading every line the same is not going to win you auditions. you need to become the character and feel the line from within. That will help you land roles. -Waffle