You have a lot of white noise in this audition. In the future you should invest into audio editing software to remove it. Will improve this 10X.
I'm aware of the white noise problem and am going to be working towards fixing this as I realize it is a huge problem. That said, how were the reads themselves? Before it seems like I'm upset with this comment, I appreciate the feedback as it helps me improve myself for the future. Have a great day!