Hi! Here to give you some feedback like you wanted. - The biggest problem about this audition is the mic quality. If you splurge on yourself and get a Blue Snowball or Yeti, it'll do wonders for you. - The acting itself isn't the worst I've seen for a first attempt. But with all first attempts, there are things to improve on. Your enunciation for the first line is really good, as most actors mumble and talk too quickly when they first start out, although you did speak fast with the Travant line. Another main thing is that I feel like you should have a little more confidence, define and refine the voice so it sounds like a true, commanding voice. Also, general advice, (and I don't care how many times you may have heard it, FEEL the lines, FEEL the emotions. Step into the characters shoes. That's a super important thing that will always help. All in all, this is a pretty impressive first attempt, and I hope you can use my words to better yourself in the future!

Sorry for the late reply! What PaigesInkandPaint is really true. I thought you did very well for a first audition too! I really like the tone of voice you give Quan when he's not in danger. Yes, it is of great help to feel what the character is going through. That last line is important because this is where Quan and Ethlyn are realising they're about to be killed. I did enjoy hearing your audition. Out of curiosity, do you have a better Mic? If you do, I would love for you to go over your lines again and hear how it sounds!