Canceled
harusatoru for Kaleb
He meets Tootsie in her first class. He is mysterios and the guy all the girls crush on and it is hard to get him flustered. He has a deep voice with a smart tone.
Oh, where are my manners. I'm Kaleb. You know I don't talk to many people, you're kinda lucky.
Funny, I like you T, you seem like a cool girl.
Oh does she now? Maybe I just have to start actually trying and make her MY girl.
I decided to make a second one, in my personal opinion, I think I put more "personality" tone with it and I think it's pretty good (since the fact I still am sick). Any feedback I should know with this second attempt? I wouldn't mind!
I can't even tell you're sick, and thanks for adding personality. Also you don't need to change but I forgot to point it out, line 3 is "start actually trying and maker her MY girl" you forgot the and but its ok. Also I would love to hear you addition for Jake.
Haha, thank you!