Well done! Thank you. Can you please retry the lines "He was a Joltik, and he was inside my hat until a big man took it." You missed a couple words, and please try to sound more concerned. Please also retry "It's alright, you'll have much fun with us anyway," but try to enunciate it better and show more emotion? Here's a great reference from an anime that's almost exactly the same, try to deliver it like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EaIbQro_mbs&t=20m51s