Thank you for auditioning. Out of your two submissions, I would have to say your Stony makes for the stronger read. You have good pacing, and you put every sentence into consideration. You read each line as a fresh new thought, and not just as something to transition into just because it's the next thing to say. I really get the feeling that you're trying to put yourself into the character's actual mindset, and working your read as if you are actually going through his thoughts. For points to improve on, I would examine the second line to read for Stony. You sort of dismissed the importance of the line, and could have read it with more weight put into it. Your read on it sounded strained and too relaxed when Stony realizes the gravity of the situation setting in. For your Chiaro, I would have to say that your read wasn't quite "charged" enough. A common misconception that actors make is mistaking volume and rate as actual intensity. For Chiaro's second line, you were speeding up the pace of the read as though it was giving it better emphasis. Instead, you should have slowed it down and taken your time with it. Thank you again for auditioning and taking an interest in my project.