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I am making a fannmovie movie called: https://www.castingcall.club/projects/connie-lucky-and-shantae-a-quest-to-save-uncle-mimic-a-shantae-fan-movie 

 And i was wondering if you can fix the grammar mistakes and stuff it has i would be thankful if you could!:)

Story!: https://hubworld23.deviantart.com/favourites/74736937/Devious-Collection