Voices From The Outer Ring (Lead Role Re-Opened)
Ghost_Effect for Carson
Claude Carson works at Hildebrand Enterprises as the CFO and treasurer. Behind his sociable and charming exterior lies a man responsible for one of Winddrift's largest money laundering schemes. He doesn't ever appear to be taking his job seriously and it is a question of whether or not he cares for the corporation. Despite this, he is skilled in his field and when it comes to those he feels is a threat; he can be quite ruthless. Carson is the type of person that enjoys getting a rise out of people, and as such he is often seen pestering Lawry in his spare time. Not much is known about him outside the workplace.
His voice should come off as smooth and mature with occasional bits of snide sarcasm in between.
[Optional: You don't have to do this, but I would like it if you introduced yourself and state what made you interested in this project.]
(Monologuing) "You want to know what amazes most about all this? Here you are, staring death in the face and yet I don't see a single drop of fear in your eyes. You aren't pleading for your life or even trying to run away. That tells me two things. One: you've been in this scenario before, and this probably isn't the first barrel you've ever had to look down. That leads me to two. You must think I'm not going to pull the trigger... either by my own volition, or some way, somehow, you yourself can stop me. You're either gonna talk your way out of this, or you're hiding an ace up your sleeve. Chips are down, time to show me what you've got."
(Matter-of-factly) "With all due respect, Lawry, if you actually took the stick out of your ass and took the time to enjoy yourself, you might actually add a few extra years onto your life. The world's got more to offer than figures and spreadsheets, you know. Your office has windows for a reason. Take a look outside 'em every once in a while and maybe you'll know what I'm getting at."
Hello and thank you for taking the time to check out my project and submit your audition. I am quite impressed by your read and the fact that you took the initiative to take some extra liberties with the character. That shows me that you went out of your way to put in effort for the role. I've noticed some minor plosives, but it isn't really that big of a deal. You match the tone for the description quite well, and come through with your nuances and placement of pauses - although you sort of overdid it in the last sentence of the second line to read. In general, you managed to put on a strong read and I would even be interested in hearing your take on Chiaro. Thank you for showing an interest in my project and taking the time to read my feedback.
Hey thanks for the feed back I really appreciate it and I will take a look at chiaro and see where I can go with em. ^_^