Wotakoi: Love is Hard for Otaku Fandub (Extras Needed)
Hanatama for Narumi Momose
(Medium-high to High) Narumi is an eager, energetic woman who loves anime and manga . . . especially yaoi. She's insecure about the fact that she likes those things, so she tries to hide it from the guys she wants to date. She loves gushing about the things she likes, especially to Koyanagi. She dates Hirotaka in the show, and they share a strange, but endearing relationship. Don't be afraid to play with the humor of her lines, she's a very naturally funny person!
If you let anyone find out I’m an otaku, I’ll tell everyone about you. “This guy over here is a seriously addicted game otaku!”
[with increasing distress as she goes] Right before our first anniversary, he started avoiding me because everyone found out that I was an otaku, and then he dumped me. He said he couldn't be attracted to a fujoshi. It hurt every time I saw him. I ended quitting the company.
I want to find out if cool Koyanagi-san is really an otaku. And if she is, then I want to find out how much of an otaku she is! And whether she’s into yaoi. This could be my chance at having an otaku friend like I’ve always wanted. But any attempt to find out would mean I’d run the risk of her finding out I’m an otaku. I have to choose my words and actions carefully…
First off, really great tone and emotion! I would say that it sort of sounds like you're holding back on the volume and not really speaking with your stomach. Try to visualize air coming from your stomach all the way up and out through your mouth, or try to make it seem like you're speaking to someone past your microphone. Right now it seems like you're speaking *to* the microphone. Hope that helped!
Thank you so much for your feedback! That definitely indeed help and I shall go and correct my mistakes! Thank you once again ^___^