Voices From The Outer Ring (Lead Role Re-Opened)
SGTpickles for Writers
When applying for a writer, provide a link where your sample work can be read. To be considered for this project, please follow the guidelines below:
1) State who you are, why you want to be a part of this project, and anything else I should know about you or anything else you want to say about yourself.
2) Describe your character. Biography, personality, and just about every detail you can provide. Remember that your character should fit in a cyberpunk/urban fantasy setting. If your character has any unique abilities or powers, please note that they may be subject to be toned down or altered at my discretion, if I feel it is necessary.
3) Write a scene for your character to demonstrate your writing style as well as how your character interacts with other people and the world around them. Though there isn't a limit to how long this can be, I would recommend no more than two pages worth. Don't worry about the actual world of the story, I'm only looking for what you can provide in a standalone work.
Say something you think would fit
Thank you for submitting your sample work and following the guidelines. I can certainly tell you have the passion, motivation, and ability for writing. You have an interesting style and prose, and I have no doubt you that you know how to flesh out a character. If I were to have any gripes, I'd say there's some bits that could be cut due to being extraneous and irrelevant - though this doesn't take away from the flow of the narrative too much. Overall, good job.
Your feedback and "gripes," as you put it, are much appreciated. I'd like to take a moment to ponder on where all these upvotes are coming from, since my post has more of them than you have auditions. I'd like to again strongly encourage anyone and everyone's auditions, even if the role you'd like has an audition already. (Writer included!) If there are any comments from those who liked this and ran, I would love to hear more feedback and interaction from just about anyone who takes the time to read my work.
I will be contacting you via Discord.