Project Yellow (RWBY Re-Write)
Glenasawrus for Jaune Arc
Jaune Arc is a student at Beacon Academy, who hails from a small town in the corner of Vale named Rivervane where he lived with his parents and 7 sisters before running away to attend Beacon. His weapon of choice is Crocea Mors, which is a sword that is considered to be indestructible and a sheath that can expand into a heater shield. The weapon was handed down in his family from his great-great-grandfather, who used it to fight in the Great War.
Jaune is a outgoing, goofy and all-around friendly person. He treats people equally and has no problems expressing himself to strangers and bonds with them easily, showing a lot of confidence. When faced with entirely new social situations, Jaune’s confidence leads to bold behavior. This can become out of hand and backfire when pursuing romance, when Jaune tries too hard, it can cause a misunderstanding. At heart, Jaune is a kind, amiable person and means well.
Jaune’s family line leads to an obsession with being a hero one of the reasons why he leaves his home. However, he was never formally trained like the rest of his family, causing him to lack experience and assign a lot of importance to his image as a fighter. He values this goal so much that he is willing to act dishonestly to achieve it using fake transcripts to be admitted to Beacon. His lack of experience makes him predictable in battle, jumping in without a real fighting style making him an open target in most cases and he tries considering the risks and behaving predictably offensive.
Jaune has shown to care for his friends and the people around him, being protective of them and having a sense of responsibility as team leader. He focuses only on his teammates' well-being physically, mentally and emotionally, disregarding his own to ensure theirs. He steps forward when others threaten his friends, and he has proven himself unwilling to do something that may hurt those he cares about.
I am looking for an impression of the official voice and you will need to be able to sing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FwBE7GqJkCQ please excuse the content it was the best I could find
"Name's Jaune Arc. Short, Sweet, and rolls right off of the tongue. Ladies love it... or at least they will"
"Sorry... But you crossed the line when you brought my friends into this."
"I'm just a small town guy looking to be a hero."
Thanks for so many upvotes guys :D anyone got any feedback please let me know :)
You asked for some feedback, so here goes! The takes capture the character pretty well, but feel a little over confident for early-Jaune. On a technical note, is your mic well isolated? The audio is kind of echo-y, moving your mic to a better acoustical location (closet with clothes) or getting some acoustic foam can help a lot to clean up that echo. Also, if the audio was compressed it also compresses the echo and actually makes it worse. In the line, "looking to be a hero" the word "looking" gets muddled. Over enunciating can ruin a good character voice, but a few words got lost and you just wanna be vigilant on that! I'm not an expert, but those were just some things I noticed! I hope it helps!
first off thanks for taking the time to get back to me on all of this ( yeah my mic is the same set up i have it for when i do live streams ) so no foam or closet living for me sadly I will look into that, yeah I didn't know to try series 1 jaune or a take on him completely but hey its ace to get feedback on the echoing and over-enunciating off the words. Thank you :)