The Surfeit Visual Novel
Drajl for Asher Ryouku
Asher is the Surfeit of planet Naizyr. He is fiercely protective and religious.
Asher is like a 30 year old angst-riddled teenager who just want to get back home.
(in your natural speaking voice, say your name and which role you are auditioning for, then give a number between 1-100...like 42 or something.)
(horribly impatient)
None of this stuff matters! Just tell me how I can stop him!
(commanding and protective)
You are NOT going to kill my brother!
Wow! great work on the first line - almost perfect! It's a bit too low for Asher can you go up an octave without harming yourself?
Thanks! And absolutely, I will resubmit later this week. Out of curiosity, which version of the first line did you prefer?
The second. The first doesn't sound impatient at all.