If you can. Try and add less with the.. well I don't know how to explain it, but it sounded like "Disney princessy?" I don't know how to explain it really. I guess, hm. I'm stumped XD I guess like just try to make it sound more laid back? Like, try and sound like the cool kid that drinks juiceboxes and wears hip sunglasses on a scooter XD

Your mic quality however is really, really good. So that's a plus, if you can try and sound a bit more laid back. You'll definitely get the part (I have everyone's lines except Yang, Ruby, and Cinder (for those reading this that isn't her, Ruby and Cinder are taken, Cinder possibly)