Ophelia
AaronC for Jareth
Jareth is the knight of water. He is a cold character who on the outside looks like you could never be friends or anything more with him but really he holds regrets and can't let anyone see the weaknesses he has. He is the strongest of the 5 knights and the oldest brother out all of them.
Your majesty, how is the Queen? Does she still maintain the powers of Ophelia? [ Prince: No] What?! Why not?!
Brothers, we must find the Ophelia. It has been years and still we have not found it. How this is a bother. If only her majesty didn’t use it so recklessly.
Hey, watch where you're going! Jeez. *scoff* Take my hand. *She takes his hand and then he feels the Ophelia. he quietly says* No, it can't be
This was alright. I didn't really enjoy the scratchy voice and there could be a lot of improvement. You sounded tired in this audition and I don't think this you at your best point. Also you produced these lines with no emotions like the first line. "What?! Why not?!" Jareth is annoyed in this line but you just gave it straight with no emotion. Please take these notes away and hopefully this has helped you develop as a voice actor! Thank you for auditioning.
Thanks for the honest criticism, I'll definitely work on these things.