Fate: Finality - A Short Audiodrama Series
Cris Without H for Count Dracula
The quintessential vampire, Count Dracula works predominantly in the shadows within this version of the classic tale. However, he makes his presence known when he bites Van Helsing's newest apprentice, Mina Harker. Even then, the gesture is only meant as a way to taunt and torture his rival.
PERSONALITY: Malicious, Egotistical, Seductive
[BORED] “Yes, yes. ‘How dare I set foot in here uninvited.’ Please, Ms. Harker. I didn’t come here to repeat a conversation I’ve had countless times before.”
[CONDESCENDINGLY] “My dearest Mina. It has only been two weeks. I had hoped to see you next when you were fully under my control. Alas, I cannot blame you for wanting to see my beautiful face again so soon.”
“Terror? You dare speak to me of terror? Little human, permit me to teach you what the word 'Terror,' truly means!”
You really nailed the smooth, seductive, egotistical tone I was looking for. The only constructive criticism I can muster is that I think it would have sounded even better with a slower tempo. Still, very well done!
Oh, thank you kindly. I agree, a slower tempo would definitely help. Thank you for the feedback, as it really matters to me and helps me improve ^^