Wingdaria Destiny - Adventure, Romance Visual Novel - PAID
fairfieldfencer for Evan Adeney (Main Character)
Evan originally felt little purpose in life, but eventually developed emotional attachment to the princess as she showed him love and compassion, unlike anyone else had done for a long time.
Age: 18
Voice: Medium, warm
Emotional Attributes:
Kind, protective, short-tempered, sensitive, some emotional instability, compassionate, experienced from his past, serious
[determined] “You don’t have a life here, and neither do I. We can start our own life together! Aria... I know this is hard for you, but if we stay much longer, we’ll get noticed. I don’t want to know what they will do if they find us here.”
[scared, confused] “I-I don’t know! Aria, I… I didn’t know what to do. I was scared he was going to kill me! He… It seemed like he was going to kill me.”
“Understandable, however, I guarantee you, we’re not here to harm you or your daughter. We would like to ask you, if maybe you’d find the kindness in your heart to help us. We just want to get out.”
[angry] “Listen, I’m not part of your game anymore, so let me be!”
[serious] “I can give you what you’re looking for, but you have to do something for me in return.”
[doubtful] “What’s the idea? To throw a rope to the other side and cross it elegantly like a spider?”
[convincing] “With all due respect. He was a Captain. I don’t think he’d let his sword slip just like that.”
[panic] “Hurry! Come on! Let’s get out!” [cough cough]
[furious] “LEAVE HER ALONE YOU SON OF A BITCH! AAAHH!!”
[crying] “No! You can’t go! We said that we would run away together!”
[crying scream] “ARIAAAA!!!”
[fighting sounds - getting hurt, punching, swinging sword and such]
[dying scream - getting killed in some way]
I would like some feedback on my audition if possible. :) I'm sure there's things I can clean up on.
Yes, feedback here~ Specifically for Evan, I think your voice might be a tiny bit too deep. I also feel as if the screaming lines doesn't quite come across for me. The desperation is not entirely there yet. On the positive end your quality is great! I also went ahead and listened to your demo reel! You're incredibly talented and can do a whole lot of things. :D Really cool~