Madoka Magica Abridged
immalemon663 for Sayaka Miki
Sayaka Miki is a main character and Madoka's best friend. Like Madoka, she is also a second-year student at Mitakihara Middle School. Tomboyish, confident, and a little brash, she upholds a strong sense of justice and adopts a heroic attitude as a magical girl. In this series Sayaka will realise her mistake much earlier in the series and she will be presented a lot more confident and cocky.
(This will be said right after the first Madoka line. Say this line in a very arrogant way) "Well of course he would choose us, come on we are the two best girls in the city."
(You sound like you realise you have made a mistake) "I was stupid so stupid."?
(Say this while being happy) "Hey look at what I have done today. Made a contract with Kyubey AND saving you... What a day"
Okay great performance. Your highlight is the second line being able to do that properly is no easy feat. The first line is good you do sound good. The second line you sound too genuine you should make it known that you believe that you are better than her.