Okay great audition. Okay you are falling into a trap that many voice actors fall into, the fear of being loud, with the last line try to find the scene that correlates as it would help as you don't really sound that angry but only just annoyed. The first is good but remember that kyoko is a tsundere and would have the little bit of sarcasm to her voice. The second line was good though. Your pitch may be a little high though