Dragon Ball: SHAKUGAN ~A Dragon Ball Fanfiction Series~
shadowking547 for Rayne
Rayne is the father of Reizo and Usagi, a Saiyan from Planet Saylm who fled the planet just before the Saiyan war began. He is indeed a proud Saiyan with a love for combat and has fought in the army of the last king to conquer planets and expand their race while denying the ways of the good Saiyans of Planet Manam but the moment war was announced, he wanted no part of it, seeing how it would easily lead to the destruction of his entire race, and fled to Planet Hazel, where he was able to meet Yurise, Amano, and Haru until the fateful day that was presumed to be his last...
( Normal ) The Saiyans of Manam were right. This war is going to lead our race to its demise and if that is really where it's heading, then I want NO part of it.
( Serious ) I warned you all to stay away from this planet, but now its too late. Now I'll have to show you just how powerful I actually am!
*various fighting sounds, including a "Spirit Blaster!" or "This ends NOW!!!"
I got to say: while the lines you performed were changed up, I loved in the energy to put into your audition. With a little work, you can do even better. Nice job!
Thanks!