OK! thats really good! but for the I hate you and the really parts, can you use less of the.. demonic bit, because chara isnt fullly demon in this roleplay, only when she gets mad aka the third line, its demoic! if you can change that one little thing you might get it! thanks - Nathan Founder of FnafTale

sorry something came up i have a major project and role to sort out sososo sorry