Darkwood
LifeDeceiver for Dove
Dove {F} {Side} {Height} 5, 9 {Age: 19}
{Personality: She's a nice person but she seems a little rough around the edges (acts tough)} {Bio: Is a young scientist that Glade works with. She has a brother named Callum (Who gets killed by Glade). She turns against Rachel later on but gets captured and experimented on}
I think you should, why would ms. Rachel need assassins, assassins kill people, Kill people glade, I think we should leave, Maybe for good…
we need to get out of here, this isn't right, It's cruel, how would you feel if you were it.
Why are you doing this, Please Stop I don't want this, it wasn't my choice!
This is pretty good. I really like how you change it at the "how would you feel if it were you" part. I will get back to you on further notice.