Hello, Mungga! This is a callback (from Director Levi), so I expect that you will at least read my feedback and hopefully use it in a re-audition.
For Orion, you have his flirty tone nailed down! It sounds very good and natural for your voice. All I suggest is that you try having more energy when reading out these lines, but that is completely optional since it sounds fine already. I also recommend a slightly deeper pitch if you want to explore that with Orion too. What I will require from you is to join our Discord server linked in the project overview to see his full audition sheet with the optional lines! If you choose to record these optional lines, then it would strengthen your audition! From there, we can work on how you do on the lines.