0:27-0:29 and toward the very end sounded pretty cool but you mentioned in the thing you were imrpovising/mumbling so I understand why it didn't immediately come out amazing; I would have taken the time to write some throwaway lyrics for it but regardless -- it was clean on top of the instrumental, so there wasn't much background noise to speak of but you were attacking the mic a little closely but that's something we can totally work on if you choose to work with me. I'mma send out a request so watch for that on discord :)-Aza